Hello!
Urgent Comment:
I've tried and failed to translate one poem.
Not because it's too hard but because i've got some sensory
overload while thinking about it.
(insert "Indiscipline" melody here)
It was "Yes and this...yes, and this too...and this! yes!
yes!" and so on.
So instead of direct translation I've made an Appropriation
Act
- wrote something like this.
With all the thoughts i've got from my own experiences of
"roaming midst the winter"...
This be the Tribute
I'm roaming midst the winter,
Blizzard, blizzard-blizzard
Steam ahead
and By the way - I'm freezing
- no odds behind
the stations platform lights
just floaters doin' what they do
before the eyes half-shut
And later
on the homeward train
I'm getting warm enough
to wrap oblivion around the cold behind...
But The Mysterious Yearning
Secretive Sad
Lonely Troubled
Confused Loving Musical
Beautiful Sensitive
Haunted Passionate
Tender Mr.Frost remembers me fondly:
he waits for me on the platform,
knacky -
BLIMEY!
I spit in burst of temper -
- lip cracks
in branches contour -
I smile in anger:
- "I ain't got time to bleed." - i think
- "pass me the salt, please" i'd say
"I'd like it significant."...
***
Sincerely,
Volodymyr
Urgent Comment:
I've tried and failed to translate one poem.
Not because it's too hard but because i've got some sensory
overload while thinking about it.
(insert "Indiscipline" melody here)
It was "Yes and this...yes, and this too...and this! yes!
yes!" and so on.
So instead of direct translation I've made an Appropriation
Act
- wrote something like this.
With all the thoughts i've got from my own experiences of
"roaming midst the winter"...
This be the Tribute
I'm roaming midst the winter,
Blizzard, blizzard-blizzard
Steam ahead
and By the way - I'm freezing
- no odds behind
the stations platform lights
just floaters doin' what they do
before the eyes half-shut
And later
on the homeward train
I'm getting warm enough
to wrap oblivion around the cold behind...
But The Mysterious Yearning
Secretive Sad
Lonely Troubled
Confused Loving Musical
Beautiful Sensitive
Haunted Passionate
Tender Mr.Frost remembers me fondly:
he waits for me on the platform,
knacky -
BLIMEY!
I spit in burst of temper -
- lip cracks
in branches contour -
I smile in anger:
- "I ain't got time to bleed." - i think
- "pass me the salt, please" i'd say
"I'd like it significant."...
***
Sincerely,
Volodymyr