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A.V. Koshy - A FOUR SQUARE AND MORE LISZT POEM

6/1/2016

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Hair             strands                black       streaked                eyes                            forehead
eyelashes     black                   whites     living                     fish                              shaped
nose            proud                  chin        cheeks                   lips                              small 
Beasts        nipples                 heart       beat                      cleavage                      sweet
nadi/adhara marmam/chakra     belly       navel                     centre                         fleet/soft
kisses          thighs                  pillars      sanctuary/moist      hands                          sweep
back            buttocks               mind       thoughts                feelings/emotions         keep
brown         chocolate              love        touch                     fingers                         caress
embrace       shudder               wanton   fire                         happiness                    deep
arms            rest                     quiet       me(l)t                     together                      in/sleep
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Denise B. de la Cruz link
1/7/2019 12:58:31 pm

Interesting impressionistic rendering of one of the key experiences of human life. Not sure that "mind thoughts feelings/emotions" succeeds in the way the other key words do: too abstract and general, underplay the sensuous embodied in the other words. Even "happiness" does not succeed, for me. [BTW, wondering if "Beasts" should not be 'breasts' in this context.]

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